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Submitted: June 30, 2008
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I really wanted to use the werewolf boy for this page, but it seemed a little non sequitur, so I opted to move the story along.

I don't know how well I did. Pacing along the entire project seems a bit shaky in my opinion, but thankfully its meant to be practice, so I'm a little more forgiving of myself. I usually expect the utmost when I plan out my Moku pages. Maybe that's why they take so long.

Of course, I felt it necessary to help reinforce the baseball stadium feel, so I added some garbage on the ground as a bit of help. My seats leave something to be desired, however.

I really need to practice some alternate face positions. I rely rather heavily on the standard resting position for my characters, so that's something to work on, especially for the high action comics for the SDL and DAWGs coming up.

Only one page to go.
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Wow, I really, really like her expressions when she's looking for the seat 8DDD Those are some top-notch hands in those two panels o_o

I can't draw "salute" hands worth beans lol :V

The trash was a VERY nice touch ;>


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"Can you turn up the bass?"
Sorry gurl, I can't hear in this place--
"I have a request that I'd like to make!"
Well, what you wanna hear gurl? Shake like an earthquake?
Meh, I know I could've done better on the hands. :) I'm glad though that you liked them. :) It was challenging though.

Yeah, I thought so too. I remember that some people made a comment about the manga style is that it doesn't skimp on the little details. Little things like the trash really help to enhance the reading experience. I thought I'd give it a shot, and it paid off.

Its something I will include in future pages of comics. :)
Yaaay <333

Details really make more break a comic. ;3


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"Can you turn up the bass?"
Sorry gurl, I can't hear in this place--
"I have a request that I'd like to make!"
Well, what you wanna hear gurl? Shake like an earthquake?

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